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		<title>Comment on E4, Legalize it by Ian W. -K</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ian W. -K</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Dec 2011 17:32:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Alright I can already tell that this is a controversial topic because so many people have posted comments on it. Well I believe that the reason marijuna is illegal in the United States is that it has a bad stigma towards it. People only think of negative things when you say marijuna. However, when you talk about cigarettes they are socially acceptable. This is probably due to the amount times it was used in the movies back in the day. Then its portrail in the movies made seem not so bad along with the little amount of knowledge that was known about it. THink about it. If people back then knew about all the dangerous side effects of cigarettes do you think it would be socially acceptable? Probably not. However, we know all the side effects of marijuna and generally focus on the hallucinaginic side effects. So maybe if marijuna and cigarettes were swapped in the movies back in the day, marijuna might be more socially acceptable.
Now as for the benefits of marijuna, it has been proven that it does help cancer patients numb their pain and help them eat. Now cigarettes do not do that. They can calm the nerves but other than that they really do not do much good. So we can see that marijuna is better in that context, but the social stigma is still there. People still only think negative things when presented with marijuna. They also say it ruins lives. Now maybe it ruins lives because of the social stigma that makes marijuna illegal. I mean during prohibition the United States governmen made alcohol illegal because of the social stigma and said it ruined lives. But then we realized that it really is not that bad and the government can make a killing of alcohol sails by taxing the hell out of it. 
So I think that marijuna does have certain benefits that make it a valuable medicine but until the social stigma is lifted it will not be legalized.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Alright I can already tell that this is a controversial topic because so many people have posted comments on it. Well I believe that the reason marijuna is illegal in the United States is that it has a bad stigma towards it. People only think of negative things when you say marijuna. However, when you talk about cigarettes they are socially acceptable. This is probably due to the amount times it was used in the movies back in the day. Then its portrail in the movies made seem not so bad along with the little amount of knowledge that was known about it. THink about it. If people back then knew about all the dangerous side effects of cigarettes do you think it would be socially acceptable? Probably not. However, we know all the side effects of marijuna and generally focus on the hallucinaginic side effects. So maybe if marijuna and cigarettes were swapped in the movies back in the day, marijuna might be more socially acceptable.<br />
Now as for the benefits of marijuna, it has been proven that it does help cancer patients numb their pain and help them eat. Now cigarettes do not do that. They can calm the nerves but other than that they really do not do much good. So we can see that marijuna is better in that context, but the social stigma is still there. People still only think negative things when presented with marijuna. They also say it ruins lives. Now maybe it ruins lives because of the social stigma that makes marijuna illegal. I mean during prohibition the United States governmen made alcohol illegal because of the social stigma and said it ruined lives. But then we realized that it really is not that bad and the government can make a killing of alcohol sails by taxing the hell out of it.<br />
So I think that marijuna does have certain benefits that make it a valuable medicine but until the social stigma is lifted it will not be legalized.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Learned by Ian W. -K</title>
		<link>http://rhetcomp.net/tilia/?p=965#comment-398</link>
		<dc:creator>Ian W. -K</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Dec 2011 17:20:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>For the most part I can agree that seven hundred fifty words did help me. However, it did not help with my typing skills. I feel that my typing skills had already been up to par because I had to do about three different courses in high school and middle school on just typing. The seven hundred fifty word website did help me with just being able to generate text and put my thoughts down on paper. It also provided a place for me to do stream of consciousness writing for my essays. Then on a personal level it provided me with something comparable to a journel about my days and the problems I was presented with during my first semester of my plebe year. I will admit most of it was just complaining and griping about all the things I had to do. Ironically, I was complaining about having to type on seven hundred fifty words at night and talking about how much I wished I could destroy that website. Despite my struggle with seven hundred fifty words dot com, I have to admit that I did get writing skills out of the program. Even though I hated every minute of it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>For the most part I can agree that seven hundred fifty words did help me. However, it did not help with my typing skills. I feel that my typing skills had already been up to par because I had to do about three different courses in high school and middle school on just typing. The seven hundred fifty word website did help me with just being able to generate text and put my thoughts down on paper. It also provided a place for me to do stream of consciousness writing for my essays. Then on a personal level it provided me with something comparable to a journel about my days and the problems I was presented with during my first semester of my plebe year. I will admit most of it was just complaining and griping about all the things I had to do. Ironically, I was complaining about having to type on seven hundred fifty words at night and talking about how much I wished I could destroy that website. Despite my struggle with seven hundred fifty words dot com, I have to admit that I did get writing skills out of the program. Even though I hated every minute of it.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Time crunch by Ian W. -K</title>
		<link>http://rhetcomp.net/tilia/?p=972#comment-397</link>
		<dc:creator>Ian W. -K</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Dec 2011 16:57:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Maxwell I totally agree with you. The in class essays prepare for our future military careers because it makes us think critically and fast. The speed that we have to generate and organize our ideas will help us when we have to make spur of the moment decisions. Also, personally I feel I am better at writing time pressed essays because I operate better under pressure. With the long term grades I just procrastinate way too much and do not get the essays done as well as I like. For instance during the most recent in class essay I felt that i generated a much better product than I did on my Essay 4. I do not know why that is the case but I have discovereed that I am definitely better at writing under pressure.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Maxwell I totally agree with you. The in class essays prepare for our future military careers because it makes us think critically and fast. The speed that we have to generate and organize our ideas will help us when we have to make spur of the moment decisions. Also, personally I feel I am better at writing time pressed essays because I operate better under pressure. With the long term grades I just procrastinate way too much and do not get the essays done as well as I like. For instance during the most recent in class essay I felt that i generated a much better product than I did on my Essay 4. I do not know why that is the case but I have discovereed that I am definitely better at writing under pressure.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Learned by chevy</title>
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		<dc:creator>chevy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Dec 2011 15:00:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I also believe I grew as a writer and that this class really helped my and my writing skills</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I also believe I grew as a writer and that this class really helped my and my writing skills</p>
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		<title>Comment on Wes Moore by Maxwell S. -K</title>
		<link>http://rhetcomp.net/tilia/?p=891#comment-393</link>
		<dc:creator>Maxwell S. -K</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Nov 2011 20:46:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I don&#039;t know how well I did on the essay but I did wait until after the brief to write my paper and I found that I understood the excerpts from Wes Moore much better. Now that doesn&#039;t mean I was able to write it any better just becasue it was heavily based on our abilities to connect this piece with a past piece from the World of Ideas and make an original argument. If you are interested my essay is below just to see how the enhanced understanding of the Wes Moore piece may have edited my paper and the content or the connections I was able to make.

In nature how an animal lives and thrives is usually formed by the type of environment it has been brought up in and the surroundings it inhabits. As always human beings may seem different but are still animals and apply to the same general rules that “Mother Nature” has set. While being said that these actions and traits are created by environment, adaptations and other behavior that separate some parts of a species from the others can be based on change and movement of an individual from the lowest insect to the greatest human being. These relocations we make as organisms not only change what happens instantaneously but also change the live of an organism. This is presented in Charles Darwin’s Natural Selection and Wes Moore’s, The Other Wes Moore. 
	Charles Darwin states directly “that a change in the conditions of life… causes or increases variability,” and this is no different from a kid growing up in any rough or pleasant neighborhood from the Hamptons to the worst ghettos in New York City (Darwin, 601). Wes Moore was no exception to this factor beginning his life in a drug infested rough neighborhood of Baltimore, eventually shifting his surrounding to a completely different location and habitat of Wayne Pennsylvania and the Valley Forge Military Academy (Moore, 89).  It could be said that this shifting in homes could have nothing to do with the change in behavior and life one Wes Moore experienced, but when compared to the very similar life origins but very different outcome experienced by “the other Wes Moore” it is indisputable that a shift in surroundings does greatly alters an individual’s outcome and adaptations. Wes Moore, the author, was uprooted from his “thugesque” life style to the disciplined life of a military cadet. This change differed from the no change in the “others” life, sending both Moore’s in totally different paths. The author became a successful professional through his “better chance[s] of profitable variations” due to his new home, while unfortunately the other Wes ended his chance for variation and success while maintaining his original habitat and behaviors, resulting in a tragedy (Darwin, 601) (Moore, xii). This great difference can be attributed to several causes but none so great as the change in surroundings and the local influences on life from the successful’s Captain Hill, to the “tragic” ones brother Tony (Moore, 70-97). 
	 Environmental factors have always and will always affect every species on the planet. A human being is no exception to the effects on behavior and actions ones surroundings will have, and a change in habitat will greatly alter the individual’s life events and outcomes. This is proven by the in-depth theories of Charles Darwin, and also the real life proof experienced and presented by Wes Moore.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I don&#8217;t know how well I did on the essay but I did wait until after the brief to write my paper and I found that I understood the excerpts from Wes Moore much better. Now that doesn&#8217;t mean I was able to write it any better just becasue it was heavily based on our abilities to connect this piece with a past piece from the World of Ideas and make an original argument. If you are interested my essay is below just to see how the enhanced understanding of the Wes Moore piece may have edited my paper and the content or the connections I was able to make.</p>
<p>In nature how an animal lives and thrives is usually formed by the type of environment it has been brought up in and the surroundings it inhabits. As always human beings may seem different but are still animals and apply to the same general rules that “Mother Nature” has set. While being said that these actions and traits are created by environment, adaptations and other behavior that separate some parts of a species from the others can be based on change and movement of an individual from the lowest insect to the greatest human being. These relocations we make as organisms not only change what happens instantaneously but also change the live of an organism. This is presented in Charles Darwin’s Natural Selection and Wes Moore’s, The Other Wes Moore.<br />
	Charles Darwin states directly “that a change in the conditions of life… causes or increases variability,” and this is no different from a kid growing up in any rough or pleasant neighborhood from the Hamptons to the worst ghettos in New York City (Darwin, 601). Wes Moore was no exception to this factor beginning his life in a drug infested rough neighborhood of Baltimore, eventually shifting his surrounding to a completely different location and habitat of Wayne Pennsylvania and the Valley Forge Military Academy (Moore, 89).  It could be said that this shifting in homes could have nothing to do with the change in behavior and life one Wes Moore experienced, but when compared to the very similar life origins but very different outcome experienced by “the other Wes Moore” it is indisputable that a shift in surroundings does greatly alters an individual’s outcome and adaptations. Wes Moore, the author, was uprooted from his “thugesque” life style to the disciplined life of a military cadet. This change differed from the no change in the “others” life, sending both Moore’s in totally different paths. The author became a successful professional through his “better chance[s] of profitable variations” due to his new home, while unfortunately the other Wes ended his chance for variation and success while maintaining his original habitat and behaviors, resulting in a tragedy (Darwin, 601) (Moore, xii). This great difference can be attributed to several causes but none so great as the change in surroundings and the local influences on life from the successful’s Captain Hill, to the “tragic” ones brother Tony (Moore, 70-97).<br />
	 Environmental factors have always and will always affect every species on the planet. A human being is no exception to the effects on behavior and actions ones surroundings will have, and a change in habitat will greatly alter the individual’s life events and outcomes. This is proven by the in-depth theories of Charles Darwin, and also the real life proof experienced and presented by Wes Moore.</p>
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		<title>Comment on E4, Legalize it by Travis H. -L</title>
		<link>http://rhetcomp.net/tilia/?p=956#comment-391</link>
		<dc:creator>Travis H. -L</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Nov 2011 18:31:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I actually agree a lot with what Ashley K. wrote.  There are numerous things that are considered legal in our society that are many times more harmful than marijuana.  I do not know this for sure, but I would be willing to bet that more people die from alcohol and alcohol-related accidents in the past year than total number of people that have died from marijuana in the past decade.  You can die from drinking too much alcohol, but as far as I know, you can&#039;t die from smoking too much pot.  The same is true with some foods.  Overeating contributes to heart disease - the number 1 killer in America annually, yet there are no policies regulating the amount of food people buy.

On another level, though, there is a very cogent argument that describes the economic benefits of legalizing marijuana.  Needless to say, even while it is illegal, millions of people in the United States are buying it anyway.  Our regulations do little to stop them, but they do stop the government from taxing these sales.  With legalization comes a whole new market to generate revenue for the national or state governments.  In light of our pressing economic situation, the long-term effects of such an increase of revenue are obvious.  A common counterargument to this idea, though, says that if people are buying marijuana illegally already, they will simply revert to their old channels for marijuana in order to avoid the tax.  However, as long as the tax is not overly exorbitant, I am sure that most people will instead switch to legal methods and pay the tax in order to avoid legal repercussions.

One last argument I have heard against marijuana sale in the United States is its role in international narco-trafficking.  A vast majority of illicit narcotics come from denied areas around the globe, places like Afghanistan, which has a monopoly over the worldwide poppy production (the origin of heroin).  Terrorist organizations across the world (like al Qaeda) get a huge percentage of their revenue from the production, movement, smuggling, and sale of illicit narcotics.  The argument that has subsisted for so many years says something along the lines of, &quot;If you buy drugs, you are financing terrorism.&quot;  Obviously, this is something most people would like to avoid.  But there is no reason that this would continue if marijuana were legalized.  the only reason drug trafficking is so lucrative is because they are the only ones doing it.  If it were legalized, drugs would be produced, transported, and sold like any other commodity.

So, in some slightly backwards way, legalizing marijuana could directly contribute to the downfall of international terrorism.  Hooah.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I actually agree a lot with what Ashley K. wrote.  There are numerous things that are considered legal in our society that are many times more harmful than marijuana.  I do not know this for sure, but I would be willing to bet that more people die from alcohol and alcohol-related accidents in the past year than total number of people that have died from marijuana in the past decade.  You can die from drinking too much alcohol, but as far as I know, you can&#8217;t die from smoking too much pot.  The same is true with some foods.  Overeating contributes to heart disease &#8211; the number 1 killer in America annually, yet there are no policies regulating the amount of food people buy.</p>
<p>On another level, though, there is a very cogent argument that describes the economic benefits of legalizing marijuana.  Needless to say, even while it is illegal, millions of people in the United States are buying it anyway.  Our regulations do little to stop them, but they do stop the government from taxing these sales.  With legalization comes a whole new market to generate revenue for the national or state governments.  In light of our pressing economic situation, the long-term effects of such an increase of revenue are obvious.  A common counterargument to this idea, though, says that if people are buying marijuana illegally already, they will simply revert to their old channels for marijuana in order to avoid the tax.  However, as long as the tax is not overly exorbitant, I am sure that most people will instead switch to legal methods and pay the tax in order to avoid legal repercussions.</p>
<p>One last argument I have heard against marijuana sale in the United States is its role in international narco-trafficking.  A vast majority of illicit narcotics come from denied areas around the globe, places like Afghanistan, which has a monopoly over the worldwide poppy production (the origin of heroin).  Terrorist organizations across the world (like al Qaeda) get a huge percentage of their revenue from the production, movement, smuggling, and sale of illicit narcotics.  The argument that has subsisted for so many years says something along the lines of, &#8220;If you buy drugs, you are financing terrorism.&#8221;  Obviously, this is something most people would like to avoid.  But there is no reason that this would continue if marijuana were legalized.  the only reason drug trafficking is so lucrative is because they are the only ones doing it.  If it were legalized, drugs would be produced, transported, and sold like any other commodity.</p>
<p>So, in some slightly backwards way, legalizing marijuana could directly contribute to the downfall of international terrorism.  Hooah.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Funny Stories by Pepe</title>
		<link>http://rhetcomp.net/tilia/?p=951#comment-390</link>
		<dc:creator>Pepe</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Nov 2011 18:24:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>•	This story actually gave me a little laugh. I do not know about you guys but I really do not have the highest military bearing out there and I try to stay as much anti-hooah as I can. One story that was pretty bad at the moment, but now I can look back at and laugh at it was something really stupid that happened during beast. I know that it’s pretty stupid to still be talking about beast, now that we are almost done with the first semester, but this is a story that really stands out from most beast stories I have heard out there. Anyways, the following are true events that happened in Bravo Company during Cadet Basic Training in the summer of 2011, for the class of 2015. My story took place during the second detail of beast, and it happened when we were in the gas chamber. I do not know about you guys, but my company was really focused on learning the gas mask procedures, so we really knew the process of putting on the gas mask. All of my squad felt ready and confident to go through the gas chamber. Once we lined up outside the door, and had our gas masks on and with a working seal, we proceeded to go into the gas chamber. At first, I was a bit nervous when I was getting the scratchy feeling in the skin. After doing some training in the room, I could not really hear what my squad leader was saying because of the muzzle in the gas mask. When my squad leader said to take off our gas masks, I thought she said to take it off and try to put it on with a effective seal as soon as possible, which makes sense because it would provide training to be able to put a gas mask in an actual environment. Anyways, I did not notice my squad mates had their gas masks off for over a minute, until my squad leader tells me to remove my mask and breathe in the tear gas. After my squad leader saw me coughing did she let us leave. As soon as we all got out and could breathe normally again did they give me a lot of shit about not taking my gas mask off. I felt really bad during that whole afternoon until they understood that it was an accident and all started laughing at the situation. Even when I think about it now, I feel bad about not paying attention and screwing over my buddies, but it still seems kind of funny that most squads stayed in the gas chamber without their gas mask for about 15 seconds while we stayed there for more than a minute without our gas masks, except for me.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>•	This story actually gave me a little laugh. I do not know about you guys but I really do not have the highest military bearing out there and I try to stay as much anti-hooah as I can. One story that was pretty bad at the moment, but now I can look back at and laugh at it was something really stupid that happened during beast. I know that it’s pretty stupid to still be talking about beast, now that we are almost done with the first semester, but this is a story that really stands out from most beast stories I have heard out there. Anyways, the following are true events that happened in Bravo Company during Cadet Basic Training in the summer of 2011, for the class of 2015. My story took place during the second detail of beast, and it happened when we were in the gas chamber. I do not know about you guys, but my company was really focused on learning the gas mask procedures, so we really knew the process of putting on the gas mask. All of my squad felt ready and confident to go through the gas chamber. Once we lined up outside the door, and had our gas masks on and with a working seal, we proceeded to go into the gas chamber. At first, I was a bit nervous when I was getting the scratchy feeling in the skin. After doing some training in the room, I could not really hear what my squad leader was saying because of the muzzle in the gas mask. When my squad leader said to take off our gas masks, I thought she said to take it off and try to put it on with a effective seal as soon as possible, which makes sense because it would provide training to be able to put a gas mask in an actual environment. Anyways, I did not notice my squad mates had their gas masks off for over a minute, until my squad leader tells me to remove my mask and breathe in the tear gas. After my squad leader saw me coughing did she let us leave. As soon as we all got out and could breathe normally again did they give me a lot of shit about not taking my gas mask off. I felt really bad during that whole afternoon until they understood that it was an accident and all started laughing at the situation. Even when I think about it now, I feel bad about not paying attention and screwing over my buddies, but it still seems kind of funny that most squads stayed in the gas chamber without their gas mask for about 15 seconds while we stayed there for more than a minute without our gas masks, except for me.</p>
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		<title>Comment on E4, Legalize it by Pepe</title>
		<link>http://rhetcomp.net/tilia/?p=956#comment-389</link>
		<dc:creator>Pepe</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Nov 2011 18:00:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>•	Well said my friend, I am glad some people are on the same level that I am in. Medical marijuana already is making taxes for the United States government, and it provides new jobs and a whole new employment field. If marijuana is to be legalized, then the number of jobs would be even higher and the taxes that the United States government would collect would also rise with that. A lot of the money that goes to drug dealing leaves the United States into other countries where the big drug cartels use it to expand their business, if marijuana was to be legalized, then the money would be kept in circulation here in the United States, and keep the economy of the United States on a steady increase.  The one thing that I might not agree with you is where you mentioned that the people that get high are just lazy and sit on the couch and do not attempt to do anything.  I really think that is really not true because calms people down, but it does not make them into lazy couch potatoes. In fact, marijuana stimulates the mind and expand an individual’s creativity and imagination. I do agree with what you say that alcohol and tobacco are far more dangerous drugs than marijuana and yet alcohol and tobacco continue to be legal. You also bring out a great point when you say that alcohol and tobacco related accidents are much higher than marijuana related accidents. Overall, I am glad that so far both persons that have commented on my post seem to agree that marijuana should be legalized.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>•	Well said my friend, I am glad some people are on the same level that I am in. Medical marijuana already is making taxes for the United States government, and it provides new jobs and a whole new employment field. If marijuana is to be legalized, then the number of jobs would be even higher and the taxes that the United States government would collect would also rise with that. A lot of the money that goes to drug dealing leaves the United States into other countries where the big drug cartels use it to expand their business, if marijuana was to be legalized, then the money would be kept in circulation here in the United States, and keep the economy of the United States on a steady increase.  The one thing that I might not agree with you is where you mentioned that the people that get high are just lazy and sit on the couch and do not attempt to do anything.  I really think that is really not true because calms people down, but it does not make them into lazy couch potatoes. In fact, marijuana stimulates the mind and expand an individual’s creativity and imagination. I do agree with what you say that alcohol and tobacco are far more dangerous drugs than marijuana and yet alcohol and tobacco continue to be legal. You also bring out a great point when you say that alcohol and tobacco related accidents are much higher than marijuana related accidents. Overall, I am glad that so far both persons that have commented on my post seem to agree that marijuana should be legalized.</p>
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		<title>Comment on E4, Legalize it by William M. -L</title>
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		<dc:creator>William M. -L</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Nov 2011 16:48:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I totally agree with legalizing marijuana. It could easily become a very successful product that could boost the national economy. The results of people using it would not be very different to alcohol and tobacco. I fact, half the time people are high they are just lazy and sit on the couch and do not attempt to do anything. The abstract ideas that people will die more if marijuana is legalized is a little too much and very exaggerated. The fact is that people in today’s time are not accustomed to tons of change and when change comes they want it to be small. Legalizing marijuana is seemed as a threat to some citizens when it really is not that harmful. If people actually got on the internet or read a book and researched the actual effects of the drug they might even change their mind and realize that it is not that bad. Crime would go down and medical usage of marijuana would not be abused or considered abused. Way more people die from alcohol related accidents that are underage than from people as a whole who smoke weed. I agree with you all and think it should be legalized.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I totally agree with legalizing marijuana. It could easily become a very successful product that could boost the national economy. The results of people using it would not be very different to alcohol and tobacco. I fact, half the time people are high they are just lazy and sit on the couch and do not attempt to do anything. The abstract ideas that people will die more if marijuana is legalized is a little too much and very exaggerated. The fact is that people in today’s time are not accustomed to tons of change and when change comes they want it to be small. Legalizing marijuana is seemed as a threat to some citizens when it really is not that harmful. If people actually got on the internet or read a book and researched the actual effects of the drug they might even change their mind and realize that it is not that bad. Crime would go down and medical usage of marijuana would not be abused or considered abused. Way more people die from alcohol related accidents that are underage than from people as a whole who smoke weed. I agree with you all and think it should be legalized.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Learned by Rae P. -K</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rae P. -K</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Nov 2011 16:41:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>While I do believe that our 750 words assignment has helped me to increase my typing speed I believe,  Ashley that it is your second point that rings the most true. In high school we were forced to write quickly, but the idea was to get us to spit out our point as fast as possible, create and support and get it done as fast as possible. I believe that AP Language was the biggest culprit in this area. We did learn how to write quickly, but here in EN101 we learned about our voices and became more comfortable with how we are as writers. I think that by forcing us to write for extended periods of words, we came to understand which words are important, and through that, we learned the best way to approach essays, both long term and In-Class. We found our voices. That is what I learned in this class. I learned how to sort out all of the words in my head and determine which were worth saying. I believe that it is only through the 750 words assignment that I would become comfortable enough with my voice to actually learn these lessons.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>While I do believe that our 750 words assignment has helped me to increase my typing speed I believe,  Ashley that it is your second point that rings the most true. In high school we were forced to write quickly, but the idea was to get us to spit out our point as fast as possible, create and support and get it done as fast as possible. I believe that AP Language was the biggest culprit in this area. We did learn how to write quickly, but here in EN101 we learned about our voices and became more comfortable with how we are as writers. I think that by forcing us to write for extended periods of words, we came to understand which words are important, and through that, we learned the best way to approach essays, both long term and In-Class. We found our voices. That is what I learned in this class. I learned how to sort out all of the words in my head and determine which were worth saying. I believe that it is only through the 750 words assignment that I would become comfortable enough with my voice to actually learn these lessons.</p>
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